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It’s the last chance you’ll have to love her
For her heart is no more than shards
It’s the last chance you’ll have to tell her
Exactly how you’ve always felt
It’s the last chance you’ll have to forgive her,
For everything and nothing
Well you’ll have to say something
It’s your last hope
Chance to get this off your mind
Bits of her are slowly slipping away
She’s falling apart at the seams.
Unraveling bit by smarting bit.
Why do you believe things will be okay?
When this is all you have left
Your soul is among the stars
With shadows clawing at your mind
Your love is slowly draining away
Siphoned by cruel hands of fate.
With each drop that evaporates,
A little more of you dies along with it.
It’s the last chance you’ll have to smile with her
She’s overtaken by a desperate fear
It’s the last chance you’ll have to hold her,
She’s little more than ethereal smoke
It’s the last chance you’ll have to cherish her,
She can’t remember who you are.
Though you’ll cry over her,
Mourn your loss,
She’ll feel no pain.
She’s disconnected from this life
Part of a separate existence
In all its strangeness.
It’s your last chance.
What do you intend to do with it?
©2006-2009 ~SeosarLindar
:iconseosarlindar:

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Well... not entirely sure what this is about... but it sounded romantic. Bitter, but romantic. So who knows?

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I really love this, it's beautifully written. Excellent word choice, and it's got great flow. Plus, the message of it, or what I interpretted the message to be, is just something I can really relate to.

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